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Your new home

The coach blustered over the cobbled pathway. The sky had switched into a dark blue – purple color and stars hid behind clouds.

'What a beautiful sunrise'

you thought while you were looking out of the small window of the coach.

'And will happen with my little Lillie now? She doesn’t know where I am. Okay, I don’t know it either, but she is only 15. Hm if I’m lucky, Ms. Smith is watching her now.'

"Hey girl, do you have a home?"

asked the white haired.

Slowly you turned around to look at him and said "Well... not really, I..."

"Awesome, then I have no problem with taking care of you. Oh, and if you are homeless, that means you do not have any money, right?"

He interrupted you.

"Yes, I do not have any."

You said a bit shy and softly.

"Ah that’s not a problem! You can earn money now, because I took you. Working at my estate fits you better than I thought. Anyway you are cute and you look like you can do housework."

He looked at you with that damn smirk again.

"Yes, I can. I have to take care of myself and my sister since we are alone. And what did you just say? I have to work at your estate?! You’ve never asked me! And you kidnapped me! Are you insane?! Let me go, I don’t want to be in this coach anymore… I..."

You screamed, but he answered "SHH, shh, shh, my dear. You can’t go – it’s dark and you are alone. Far away from your hometown or wherever you lived before. And I won’t let you go. Ahh, I like it when you are angry"

He gently pulled your hair.

"You bastard don’t touch me!"

You screamed and pushed his hand away. All you got was a giggle out of your opponent. Before anything else could happen, the coach stopped.

"Oh, I think we are home, dear. C’mon let’s go!"

He opened the door and took your hand. You hissed when he did this, but he ignored it. When you finally stepped out you saw a big door in front of you. Before you could say anything a servant welcomed you – better said, he welcomed the white haired.

"Sir, you finally arrived. Did you have a nice journey? Oh who is this lady? She looks dirty – a poor street kid you picked up? Very lovely, sir!"

'What did he just say?!'

You were ready to respond instead of the ruby eyed guy who kidnapped you, but he was faster.

"Yes, and she is not… hmm, she is my new personal maid so treat her better. Take her into the free room on the second floor and show her where she can wash herself and bring her the clothes of my personal maid outfit."

He said and ignored your angry look.

"My excuse, of course sir. Madam?"

He bowed and turned around at you. He looked at you and went into the house. A sign that you had to follow him. Unsure what to do, you decided to follow him.

What was your choice? You didn’t have one.

'This is the worst day of my life'

you told to yourself while you were following the servant.

The whole estate was full of expensive furniture and oil pictures of persons. Here and there you saw some other maids in black and white outfits.

'Oh no'

you thought and while thinking, you didn’t notice that the servant stopped. You nearly bumped into him. He ignored that and opened the door with a key.

"Miss, this is your room. May I tell you the rules? You are allowed to lock your door in the evening, because of privacy. But only at the evening, when you have done your work. Breakfast for the servants and maids is 6 o’clock in the morning on the first floor in the kitchen. You can find it near the entrance. Stealing or other criminal things will be punished hard by the sir himself. Oh he will tell you, I think. You are his private maid. Therefore you get special clothes. Wait a minute."

With this introduction, he went away.

'Nice rules'

you thought and you weren’t happy about your current situation.

"Here are your clothes, miss."

He said and you were shocked, because you didn’t notice when he walked in the room.

"Oh, thank you…?"

"Oh I forgot to tell you, I am Trenton. And after you are finished with washing up and stuff, the master will await you in his office. You can find it with the room plan on every floor."

He smirked and then he walked away.


You nodded, closed the door slowly and locked the door, because you wanted to wash yourself. After a shower and plans what to do (you decided to see what will happen) you went to the bed where Trenton put your new clothes.

The size was perfect but the outfit… was… ugh… totally not your taste. You looked into the mirror. Very short blue skirt, a tight blue jacket – designed like a uniform and a blue ribbon for your hair. You had to smile about that.

"Well… cute…"

You said in sarcasm. Then you opened the door and stepped out.


What next?? Let’s see in Chapter 3 tomorrow ;)
I hope you like it <3

Reader x Prussia Chapter 2

Chapter 1 : [link]
Chapter 2 : :star: Here :star:
Chapter 3 : [link]
Chapter 4 : [link]
Chapter 5 : [link]
Chapter 6 : [link]
Chapter 7 : [link]
Chapter 8 : [link]
Chapter 9 : [link]
Chapter 10 : (WARNING LEMON) [link]

awwwwwww I hope u like it ^^

(maybe someday I make one in English ;) )

This story belongs to me and everything came out my fantasy so don't bother me for things you don't like in it - Don't like don't red - Haters gonna hate

Anyway I hope you like it :huggle:

My beta Reader(s) : *TheOneAndOnly-K

Info :
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I have an account where I write FFs but in German sorry for all non german speaking persons :I Check it Out : [link]

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Art (c) - =TaNa-Jo 2012
Prussia (c) - Hidekaz Himaruya
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CupcakesYum1 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i named the butler Sebastian...anyone get it
cloudhurrplz -- revamp
TaNa-Jo Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha xD 
meara8558 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
oh my gosh, i laughed so hard that his name was trenton XD since that is my ex's name.
SakataBluemoon Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
terribly sorry to say this because I know that English is not your mother language, but the first sentence... 'The couch blustered over the cobble pathway.' I believe where you have written couch (a piece of furniture for sitting) you meant coach (a horse drawn mode of transport).

I'm enjoying the story though. ^^
TaNa-Jo Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh..thats kinda embarassing >< Oh noes I corrected it - thank you very much for telling me that mistake C: Ah I kinda need a beta reader ._.

Oh I am glad to hear that :3
SakataBluemoon Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Don't worry about it, everyone makes weird mistakes sometimes. ^^ All part of the learning/writing experience.
TaNa-Jo Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ thanks anyway
Breaks-Kingdom Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Student General Artist
*sees picture* ......oh my•///• :iconsuperkawaiiplz:
*reads story* :iconblushplz:
TaNa-Jo Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :3 chapter 4 tomorrow ^^
Breaks-Kingdom Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Student General Artist
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